conceptual eyes of the fish
forget to blink
yet red wishbones
light harbours with decrees
and
it feels alright in coming to terms
with wholesome rejections afresh
miasma and bread in a crowded bakery
and they say
familiarity builds indifference
a wall between touch and feel
between fragrance and smell
between uncertainties of comprehension
you will never know me
yet i stand looking through
your window at my face
undecided whether to shave
or let my shards grow
stab your depth
red and white
capricious eyes
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between fragrance and smell
between uncertainties of comprehension'
Oto bhalo to likhte janina kintu porte bhison bhalobasi apnar kobitata pore I just colsed my eyes and feel it...simply Awesome...
pratham line duTo aarhashhTa laagachhe. "conceptual eyes of the fish" - ekebaare bhaalo laagachhe naa. oTaake badlaa. kintu goTaa kabitaaTaa satyi bheeshhaN sundar. kayekaTaa line aaro natun, refreshing karaa Jaay.....& by the way.....John Ashbery is everywhere. Be aware.
ReplyDelete"between fragrance and smell" - e ki balate chaaichhis bujhate paari, kintu balaaTaa ki aar ekaTu bhaalo hay eibhaabe likhale -
between redolence & its sensation
Sanchita, dhanyobaad. Boss, Thik-i bolechho...Thik korbo... bramha (John Ashbery) kothaay nei ? aami to rimbaud-er lekhaateo Ashbery-r probhaab paai :-)
ReplyDeleteamar besh bhalo laglo
ReplyDeletea wall between touch and feel
ReplyDeletebetween fragrance and smell
between uncertainties of comprehension
you will never know me
yet i stand looking through
your window at my face
..erokom bhabna banglay lekha khub koThin.
amar ja hoy - onek bhabna ashole english e bhabi, onek shobdo ashe english e (e.g., flip, juggle, shuffle) jegulo engish e joto sharp banglay toto sharp na. shutorang shei bhabnagulaa fele dei.
arghya
"a wall between touch and feel
ReplyDeletebetween fragrance and smell
between uncertainties of comprehension
you will never know me
yet i stand looking through
your window at my face"
let the day come when people will be aware enough for thoughts like these to be widely understood as of deepest sense of congruence. We are not there yet :-)
The fact that 'you will never know me' - is still not accepted positively by many. O - our longing for bubbles , bubbles after bubbles , don't let us think like this in real life .. people who do think like this, readily end up cornering themselves from the rest..
arghya